Hello welcome back to my blog I will be sharing with you one of my new quick writes...
There was a lot of noise coming from the kitchen... cautiously I creeped to the fridge, I quickly slammed the fridge door shut and...
''I'm telling on you!'' I screamed from the top of my lungs. I swear I probably woke up the whole town.
"Nothing!" she nervously shot back. Chocolate covered her mouth... My chocolate.
''Mum! Waelyn's eating my chocolate!''
I had a smug look on my face. The look that will get her in trouble.
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