Hello again,It has been a while since I have posted another blog post so today I will be sharing with you one of my favourite quick writes I have done... we are given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.
The light filtered through the trees as... Birds sung away. Trenching down on to the sand, waves crashed up on to the beach, as the afternoon air blew in my face. Step by step it felt like paradise. The sun glistened on the waves bouncing back into my eyes. Palm trees covered over me like skyscrapers. The sand felt like little sprinkles invading over my feet. The water slowly washed up on my feet, washing the sand off.
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